The Wanderers' Library

I wrote a thing and would like feedback on it

When another GOI takes the books, What can be done.

i wrote this, can you tell me what you think?

so i wrote a thing and i have no idea if it is good. it is as yet incomplete, but i don't feel like continuing to write it out tonight. let me know if it is terrible.

This is my description, where I ask for feedback about the draft linked in my contents.

I'd be grateful for any ideas and advice.

first draft

yay onto the site!

Just looking for feedback -Thanks

pls 2 rede adn comment thx oc do not steale

Dystopian short tale. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

John Mandeville was the bossest boss who never existed, but seriously, look him up!

How (not) To Jury-Rig Your Dragon

I this hope one doesnt become forgotten.

Can i have some feedback on this slightly interactive thing?

“Yes I think we are still on Earth” Said Mr. Nelson looking around quizzically. “The other sure thing is that we are on a ship called the Moa, she is captained by Sir Charles Phipher of the Royal Para-Scientific Museum.” Elaborated Nelson in the most mocking of faux posh accents. “Although for our purposes we may call them The Jailors” he added with a wink.

would appreciate some feedback, link to sandbox in post.

I wrote new piece of free-verse and was wondering if it seemed site ready or needed some work