I've corrected the tags and the vote module. Huzzah!
That said, this isn't bad for a first entry from a new user. I found it amusing in a lot of parts, clever in others, and while there were a couple of really small grammar errors (comma/conjunction style whatnot), the work itself isn't bad.
Take my upvote, sir. Write more.
"WELL FOUNDATION. YOU MADE IT SO EASY. SO VERY VERY EASY." - dimensionpotato