Chapter 1: For Sorrow / Discussion

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rumetzen 16 Apr 2015 13:01

I'm mad that this is almost identical to a draft I was working on, and that docent handies are now canon.

Otherwise good work, looking forward to more.

(account deleted) 19 Apr 2015 23:19

They were never not canon.

I'll be interested to see where this goes. I've always thought that the Magpies were one of the more interesting GsoI, and it's nice to see them finally getting some love.

Bryx 24 May 2019 06:46

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Heartful 18 Apr 2015 02:10

This is some good stuff. Especially love the worldbuilding.

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LilyFlower is cute and amazing <3

Palaios 18 Apr 2015 04:43

Nice to see the start of another long form tale.

Also yay Ravelwood! (although it is funny that a world that is suppose to be very hard to reach has more written about it than almost any other world on the site)

thedeadlymoose 10 May 2015 03:12

Upvoted immediately for the excellent Library portrayal in the opening.

I only liked it more by the time I was done reading.

And, it's a series of stories! That's exciting! I hope to see more of this soon. :D