I really liked it! For some reason it reminded me of Lewis Carroll's poems, except without weird, made up words. I'm really not sure why this is the comparison that came to my mind, but oh well, it made me like it, so good for you I guess! Definitely a +1 :D
EDIT: Okay, I know this is nothing like Lewis Carroll's poetry, but I also figured out why tf did I think of it, and it's the "tweet tweet, hooray" part, because it reminded me of half of a line from Jabberwocky. Mystery solved, good job on the entry nevertheless