Point One: Unfortunately there are no critters to thank for help with this, so far as I remember. If I forgot you, my apologies, please let me know.
Point Two: Related to point one, this has been in my sandbox for far too long, I needed it out, and fast, hence lack of crit. If you find something that needs fixing, fix it, if you think there's a more general change that could make this better, let me know.
Point Three: I think I made it clear right at the end; I hope for this to become a common subject of writing here at the Wanderer's Library. I don't think it's the right setup for a canon, but I'm imagining something similar. If you have art inspired by this, let me know, like for example, a school crest… Those of you who I'm winking at know who you are.
Thank you for reading.