I quite like this. The image of Kheneyelda only being visible as a stylized print was interesting. The idea of someone falling in love with a figure of propaganda (if that's the right term) is one that coincides with my own interests, but was genuinely something I had never seriously considered before.
If I had to make a complaint, it would be that the title seemed a bit over-dramatic and actually put me off of reading it for a while. However, it works splendidly in the context of the article. Hope to see more from you soon! +1