I have to say that I'm not a fan of this one: It's too short for its own good, as it only explains a concept and… That's it. It feels like the concept of the article is here, but there isn't much past this concept. I feel like this would do much better with a better explanation of Jerome: A story of his rebellion, or something along those lines could help, instead of just being mentioned.
Also, a minor nitpick, but the theme makes it so you can't see the footnote on the paperpiece.
Overall, wish there was more meat to this one. -1