http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/sunnysunday-s-box
This started off as one thing, then it completely evolved into another thing. I think I'm proud of it! It's a short one, about ~240 words or so, but I'll spice it up later by converting it into a comic adding a few pieces of art EDIT 3: After thinking long and hard about it I'm just going to have no/minimal visuals. This does have the drawback of potentially making the story harder to understand without images to back it up, so I'll greatly appreciate any feedback on that.
My main concerns:
— SPAG
— Is the story easy to understand?
— Does the title fit?
— Can the main character be empathized with?
Thank you for reading!