This is just a summary of things we already know. It doesn't really add anything, and there's very little characterization to make me care about the speaker, and by extension what they're saying. The writing itself is fine, technically speaking, though it shades to purple more than it doesn't, but I can't find anything in the subject matter to be interested in.
I'd suggest expanding this, giving more background to the character. Why they made their choice, how they came to be here, and joined the Hand. I'd also narrow your viewpoint. The bit at the beginning, simplifying everybody's opinion into practically the same sentence, I liked that, but when you try to add in a short description of how the GOC does things, it just feels out of place, and breaks up the story. The character has only personally experienced life in the Foundation, and the Hand, right? So those are the only viewpoints they'd be able to offer any complex opinions on.
EDIT: Also, your sandbox is named after your draft, instead of your username. You can fix that by going to Options at the bottom of the page, and selecting Rename.
