Please criticize me if you feel I made any kind of mistake.
Date: 25 May 2016 21:00
Number of posts: 2
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It may be a but hypocritical for me to say this, but I think this would be better if the sentences were simpler. There is a lot of long, plodding text, during which not much plot happens. At present, it is a bit laborious to read.