This is the second of the writings concerning the hunter Verusa.
Please post your opinions of it here.
Date: 26 May 2016 19:08
Number of posts: 3
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The story has good buildup, but calls things as soon as something interesting happens. No vote, I like the writing and the trio are working for me so far but it seems to be all buildup that ends at the moment of climax. This could definitely stand to be longer.
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I've written a tale upvoted by Djoric, Bright, Echo, Yoric, Moose, VAE and Voct, fite me irl if you don't respect
Yeah, this is supposed to portray Verusa's own thoughts, for the most part, and he tends to skip over things that he finds irrelevant. I have not been able to portray this very well, but it should clear up more in the future when more people's view points are added, and I hopefully get better at writing.