A slight modification of an early story, told from the viewpoint of an early character of mine. Do you describe to me, in detail, what is wrong with it.
Date: 13 Nov 2011 06:47
Number of posts: 3
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Why isn't there more of this? What happened to this author? This is quite good.
The only thing that bothered me about this was the random His Dark Material's reference but other than that…