Being new to the Library (At time of writing) I thought that I'd best submit this for scrutiny before I post it. Any feedback would be much appreciated, as I'm also lacking for ideas in regards to add.Thank you for your time.
I can see the beggining of a mystery, but it needs more bang to it.
I like it well enough. The main issue I have is that the context isn't interesting - I don't have a reason to care about what I'm reading. But I'd still upvote.
I'm suprised by how positive your feedback is (insofar, at least), and I suppose I should provide some clarity. I do intend to develop this, as I consider further what items to add - I'd like the list to be rather extensive, and I also plan an expansion of the commentary. In addition, know that this is by no means an independant story, as I plan to expand upon many of the concepts mentioned here, and several other concepts which relate to or support them, in later articles.