I'm pretty sure I saw this seminar at a Motel 6 conference room.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 06:34
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+1, nice post
I fixed some typos, but wasn't sure what to do with this:
He knowledge came to him if he could catch it, he would be let go.
There were less men in the room than there had been a second ago.
I didn't change this, because not everyone follows this rule anymore, but I think it should be "fewer men" rather than "less men". Discrete subjects are "fewer". Quantities are "less". (fewer apples, fewer dogs, less water, less traffic).