Hello! With my new library card in hand, I would like to ask for comments on this New Document I just produced. (I haven't been in chat yet. Maybe some day when I feel chatty.)
Agreeing. Frankly, the images feel almost extraneous. They don't provide enough padding, and when you take them away, you have about 100 words of content. I would advise reducing the images to small, right-aligned items present in only a portion of entries, rather than making them the main focus.
I would be happy to re-evaluate this when you increase the content.
Thanks to the both of you for reading it. I will increase the content as you suggest.
I liked the idea of just a few photographs with cryptic comments written on the back, but that may not work so well. I will turn it into a more detailed journal.
Here is a New!, Improved! draft. It's now much more leafy, and the pictures are smaller and collapsible.
The words “suffusion of yellow” and the reference to a cat flap are, of course, a tribute to Douglas Adams. In a sense, it's a story about the interconnectedness of all trees…