*** Corrected to be link to Sandbox article instead of full story.
No drafts in the forums please. Set up a sandbox (http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/), put it there, and post the link here.
I don't find the idea or the writing particularly compelling, and it's way too short.
At the moment what you have is a madman's scrawl on a stratum of igneous rock with references to bone meal or something in the later layers. This needs a story. This needs some sense too because I can't figure out how you'd determine that those chemicals came from human bones as opposed to say bones in general.
Thanks for the feedback Vivax… As you said, it's not anywhere near complete. It's a start for me. It's an idea that's been banging around in my head for a long time now and I wanted to get it down in some form. I'm still working on the rest.