Okay man, I feel really bad about this, but I gotta give it a -1. FOR NOW. My biggest issue with this article is the terrible formatting, if this could be fixed, I would /immediately/ change my vote to a +1. It's largely well written with a good campy sort of vibe, and I really enjoyed it. So once you fix those formatting errors, I will happily change my vote. (Also what book does this belong to? For tagging)
Date: 30 Aug 2013 22:26
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Voting the same way here. This was just painful to read, and I can't upvote a good story presented so poorly.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
I've written a tale upvoted by Djoric, Bright, Echo, Yoric, Moose, VAE and Voct, fite me irl if you don't respect
I spent a while struggling with this one mainly because I knew something was wrong with it, but I couldn't figure out what it was. Thanks for clarifying. Also any suggestions with what to do with it?
You know, other than make it not a splurge of text?
Alright, I've broken up the paragraphs a bit. Does it read any easier or should I still tweak it a bit more?
You might want to remove the colon from the URL. Because of wikidot's parsing, that really messes with how pages are catalogued — a colon indicates a category, so it doesn't register as a normal entry.
Can I ask: what Book was this intended for?
This was silly, but I enjoyed it.
I did have to fix a massive amount of errors. And then, I discovered that it would've been even more errors if Camber Squid hadn't already done a ton of edits, so thank you to her as well. :P
And it still needs more work. Author, consider giving this another once-over.