A bit too heavy-handed, but otherwise I like it.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 00:30
Number of posts: 7
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I like that you embedded the reveal into the middle of a paragraph so it wasn't possible to tell from a glance, even if it is possible to twig what was going on right before it was actually said. I also like that it doesn't feel like a cop-out, and it's just generally poignant.
This may have to do with the fact that I'm a dog person, but +1