I feel like this wanders around a lot without going anywhere, and the themes have already been worn thin by previous works.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 18:49
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I didn't have much issue with the theme, but for everyone who reads this I would suggest steering clear of this particular theme for a while, if only for variety. (Unless you feel you can put a good spin on it, of course.) I didn't think it wandered too much either; that issue would most likely have been solved by lengthening the story. Considering this was for a contest I don't blame you for the short length.
I like this; not overly, but it's a nice little thing. It adds a nice perspective to the collective of the site, and it's a quaint little piece you might stumble upon and think about for a while.
It's a bit short, but until the contest ends, that can't really be changed, and I do quite like what's here. It's concise, and the last few lines round it up quite well.
It does need to be tagged, though, and I'm not sure what Book its for.