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this is a beautiful soft piece for a beautiful soft soul. i have not read anything else by this author but i really want to now. thank u for this gift… bless u and ur heart

by minminminmin, 20 Sep 2020 10:14

Hmmm. I'm not sure on what the goal of this is. It feels short, and it doesn't have enough of a narrative for a typical WL story. I recommend expanding a lot more (continue the story of J and what happens next) and rereading for grammar errors.

As far as what's here, there isn't a lot of description, or at least sufficient description to give a good picture of the cavern.

a large cavern with a fighting cage in the center and seating all the way around it.

How do the interior walls of the cavern look? Smooth, blue, red, rough? Describe the cage as well: What material is it made out of? How large is it? The situation of the seating also needs more detail—Is everyone able to sit? Is the cavern packed?

I like the potential this idea has, but I feel like the story you have so far doesn't do it justice. What are your plans for further writing (what would you put in the other chapters/how would you expand chapter one)?

Review (no rating yet) by Avelon21Avelon21, 19 Sep 2020 00:33

Hello! My name's Avelon, and I hope you have a good time here!

Check out the Ideas and Advice Forum when you need review, and our List of Members' Pages is a good place to start if you'd like to know more about the writers here (and ofc the chat).

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WELCOME !! by Avelon21Avelon21, 19 Sep 2020 00:21

Howdy! I'm RadiantShark. I'm here to try something new, and to grow in my skills as a writer!

I look forward to getting to know all of you!

Plz give a + or - rating with ur review. It helps me figure things out (just put + or - at the top of review)

Necroposting as all fuck, but I thought it was important to know I almost cried from this one. Thank you

by Snapdragon133Snapdragon133, 17 Sep 2020 22:21

Good good good. I like it

by Snapdragon133Snapdragon133, 17 Sep 2020 22:17
RE: New Articles 4 by Researcher BlackResearcher Black, 15 Sep 2020 04:32

I felt like I couldn't breathe at the end of the story. It's obvious why this one is so highly rated.

by Snapdragon133Snapdragon133, 15 Sep 2020 02:57

today i'll have you around
today i'll have you around

i wrote this poem for a beautiful friend of mine who passed very recently and who taught me a lot about what it means to be a human around other humans. i hope this honors her memory.

special thanks to a soft cacophonya soft cacophony for crit!

(if you like my work, visit my author page for other poems, prose, and songs)

author post by carolynn ivycarolynn ivy, 14 Sep 2020 03:07

It's the hottest new trend. It's the wildest new drug. It's heart-pounding, time-bending, Black Market Magic.

Written for the Serpentine Sorting System.

Re: New Articles 4 by MaliceAforethoughtMaliceAforethought, 13 Sep 2020 21:59
Author Post by MaliceAforethoughtMaliceAforethought, 13 Sep 2020 21:53

I loved this all the way back during Wanderer's Depths and I still like it now. It was a pleasure reviewing it, and the art is spectacular.

+1 by SebarusSebarus, 12 Sep 2020 03:33

Hell yeah congrats Max!!! Really proud of you for finally getting this posted!! Nice job getting everything cleaned up and the redraw of the art is spectacular as always!

Crossing the boundaries of uncertainty.

+1 by UncertaintyCrossingUncertaintyCrossing, 12 Sep 2020 03:26

This is my first story, I'm honestly a bit nervous posting it but I had a great time writing and creating artwork for this piece. This was originally for a contest, but I ended up not posting until I was absolutely certain I was happy with the end result.
I made the image myself, I release it in Creative Commons.
Thanks to SebarusSebarus and UncertaintyCrossingUncertaintyCrossing for helping to review and encouragement!

Author's Note by WendipeligoWendipeligo, 12 Sep 2020 03:21

Images made by my friend and used with his permission. You can check out his work here:

Mancuspias by Din-BidorDin-Bidor, 10 Sep 2020 17:12

Noting that I believe you already got review a few days ago in the chat. I agree with the review given in the chat, that this is a little too short and needs more expansion.

Absolutely fantastic.

by MaliceAforethoughtMaliceAforethought, 07 Sep 2020 09:44
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