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Thank you for your critique!

Please do write an additional story with the character. A "miraji" is my name for the character as I didn't want to actually use the words genie or djinn to describe it.

by ZeedrZeedr, 21 Apr 2018 07:30
Re: New Articles 3 by rumetzenrumetzen, 21 Apr 2018 02:03

I really like the idea of a WL series based on Latin-American history/myth, and there's some interesting worldbuilding going on here. The problem is, I don't think it's particularly well paced (it feels rushed and you never get a good sense of any one moment), and the language is pretty sloppy/vague. My advice would be to try to slow down the narrative a bit so you can be more descriptive in the way you tell it. A good story is all about getting the right flow of information. With some work and fixing up, I can see this becoming something very nice though.

by rumetzenrumetzen, 21 Apr 2018 02:01

I like this. You have good descriptions of a variety of different characters, and are able to tie all those different characters into a cohesive, interesting story. I think the prose could be better in a lot of places— many of the descriptions of setting are very vague — but overall this is a neat parable that wraps up really well. Thanks for writing!

EDIT: Would you mind if I did a follow up/additional story based on this using the character of the desert genie again?

by rumetzenrumetzen, 21 Apr 2018 01:57

May all your wishes be granted in the Oasis of the Miraji.

Re: New Articles 3 by ZeedrZeedr, 20 Apr 2018 17:12
Re: New Articles 3 by Prof_JLProf_JL, 02 Apr 2018 00:26

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There are a number of typos in this tale. Why not put this through an English spell-checker?

by ObliviNateObliviNate, 23 Mar 2018 19:42

English is not my mother-tongue. Thanks KirkeSteinKirkeStein for help me translate this article. And emmmm… I hope you will enjoy it.

by Freedom KooFreedom Koo, 23 Mar 2018 02:25

My inspiration for this one was a series of videos I found on YouTube, featuring soft rock songs that'd been distorted so as to sound like they were playing on the PA of an empty shopping mall. "Africa" was one of them, and it struck me with this extraordinary sense of loneliness hearing it in that way, and the rest just flowed out of my brain from there.

by SmaptiSmapti, 20 Mar 2018 08:34

I think I saw the image that inspired this story… the writing here gives me that same vibe. +1


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by RogetRoget, 19 Mar 2018 22:07

My first attempt at writing something for the Library, based vaguely on a scene that I imagined while in bed last night.

by SmaptiSmapti, 18 Mar 2018 12:40

So…what is "wit da yout"?

by ilovecforeverilovecforever, 04 Feb 2018 13:24

So my idea is that instead of naming shelves after individuals, the shelves are named after subjects. Perhaps sections of shelves with similar content are named after individuals. Just a thought.

Renaming shelves by Doctor CoyugaDoctor Coyuga, 31 Jan 2018 23:32

“What did I do? Well, I waited ‘til he weren’t lookin’, and I turned myself into a pen knife and laid myself at her feet. Hehe… Sweet little thing knew just were to put it too.”

Oh man do I love stuff like this. Might have to dive into the Wanderer's Library again more.

by toadking07toadking07, 27 Jan 2018 20:57

This one hopes you can detect pheromones.

Damn it, only in the Wanderer's Library.. These are too much fun!

I don't know how well this would translate over to the Foundation, but I've wanted to bring a Missed Connections collab page for a while now.

by toadking07toadking07, 26 Jan 2018 18:29
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