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Re: Page Deletion by GaffseyGaffsey, 20 Feb 2019 14:52

I think we should add page deletion system in this site to prevent the decrease of quality in the content of the site.


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Page Deletion by Omega ShenronOmega Shenron, 20 Feb 2019 14:38

So this definitely didn't go where I was thinking it'd go. Interesting to see this dip into very blatant Foundationverse territory but that's not necessarily a bad thing. As I've said a dozen times or more on this journey, I want to know more. Is this part of a greater continuity, or just a compelling standalone? I am mildly worried that this requires a level of familiarity with the Foundationverse that some casual readers may not possess, but overall definitely worth the short time it takes to read.

I don't know that we need an official group, as the volume of drafts is relatively low and the activity level of staff is similarly low.

That said, people picking up drafts and giving critique is good in general, and the idea of a group engaging in it as a group is cool and creates a sense of solidarity. I suggest "the Conspiracy of Reviewers" as the name, because everyone wants to be part of a good conspiracy.

Re: Critique Team by GaffseyGaffsey, 19 Feb 2019 14:44

Meta commentary: We're back bitches. Gonna take breaks on weekends, this time around, though.

This is some good stuff. The historical context provided by the author in the discussion wasn't necessary for this to be good, but it adds a couple layers to its depth. Quite tragic, and I'm curious how close to the real event this comes. I'm reminded of Ira Hayes, and more specifically the poem "I Can't Get Started" by Ai. This wave of Daily Reviews is off to a good start it seems.

It seems that English is not your first language, author. I noticed due to the wide number of grammatical errors which usually irritates the readers and lead them into down-voting.

The piece is really hard to understand because of the syntax of the sentence.

I think you should back down from writing for now, and read more literary pieces and books here in the site.


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by Omega ShenronOmega Shenron, 19 Feb 2019 00:56

I think there should be dates for the contents of Most Recently Created Pages and Most Recently Edited Pages and how many comments are there in each article's discussion page.


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Dates for Recents by Omega ShenronOmega Shenron, 19 Feb 2019 00:49

I think there should be a critique team here in the site, just like Zyn's Butterfly Commando in SCP Foundation. It will help the writers conceptualize better and will make the contents in the site better.


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Critique Team by Omega ShenronOmega Shenron, 19 Feb 2019 00:41

Excited to read it!

Just as a FYI, please announce your articles here in the future!

Re: Hymns for the Cruel wars by GaffseyGaffsey, 14 Feb 2019 13:48

This is okay? I get the idea that weird stuff is happening, that it's all treated as normal by the people doing it, and that a normie's brief view of it is kind of surreal. It's just that I don't care about it? Like, it 's just a bunch of random details of weird stuff thrown together without any kind of coherence. There's no larger story I'm curious about, just "raccoons and guys with no noses and their hands vibrate."

I think that this can be and should be done better, so I'm giving it a -1.

"Sorry."

I did grin a little bit at this, though.

by GaffseyGaffsey, 14 Feb 2019 13:45

Possibly an error, but I actually kind of like it. Reinforces the idea that human perception isn't the default for the Library.

Re: A suggested edit. by GaffseyGaffsey, 14 Feb 2019 13:06

Redtooth's description says her "hourglass" ticked, aren't they (mostly) silent?

A suggested edit. by GuardianNWCGuardianNWC, 13 Feb 2019 19:10

I think there should be a Sandbox link in the side menu for new members in the site.


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Maybe the title was setting up my expectations for something different, or maybe it was just that the actual spooky bits came in the last 10%, but this did nothing for me. -1

by GaffseyGaffsey, 13 Feb 2019 10:48

Reading this was just waiting for a punchline that never came. -1

by GaffseyGaffsey, 13 Feb 2019 10:44

Item must be able to cast spells,like a wand,staff,rune,book,critical,exe.

ect?

Point your Casting Tool at your oponate

opponent?

Vile of Blood

vial of blood?

by EtinjatEtinjat, 12 Feb 2019 13:37
Re: Not again! by DrEverettMannDrEverettMann, 12 Feb 2019 02:13

Sorry, still getting used to everything around here. it should be fixed to the best of my abilities now.

Thank you! by ShapethrowerShapethrower, 10 Feb 2019 17:00

There is a small problem your tags does not follow the tag guide.
Maybe you need the pseudo tags made by css.
Of course, you can decide by yourself

by EtinjatEtinjat, 10 Feb 2019 15:28
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