Comments for page "WE WERE FREE"

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Sat, 13 Jan 2024 04:30:34 +0000

I like this,but this does feel like a trap for people who enjoy difficult words and long winded sentences. I feel like this could be much better as a more sensical piece, rather than just getting lost amid the weeds of philosophical grandeur. At the end of the day, while the writing is impeccable, I feel like you could get rid of a lot of fat here and get a similar, albeit tidier outcome. There's also, honestly, a few lines that made me roll my eyes; definitely something more written because it sounded 'smart' rather than fully fitting the writing itself.

All in all, an interesting read, but I find so many issues with it that I feel it simply is not something meant for me. Novote.

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Fri, 26 Apr 2019 13:49:14 +0000

this was and is quite possibly the best thing I've ever read, the wonderful way the story is written and the sense of profound wonder and awe created by the mix of words and imagery makes this story more than a gem in my book. I also enjoyed the reference to "Uścisk" or the name of 173. i certainly hope you make more things like this in the future! +1

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Fri, 12 Dec 2014 06:31:14 +0000

A sad world,isn't it?We're lucky that we don't live in a world like that,at least for now.lol

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Tue, 02 Dec 2014 21:14:23 +0000

Whaddya know. It did.