Comments for page "Multiplicity" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898/multiplicity Posts in the discussion thread "Multiplicity" Tue, 08 Sep 2026 12:29:18 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898#post-5097510 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898/multiplicity#post-5097510 Fri, 01 Oct 2021 18:34:27 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 I'm conflicted on this one. The idea here is really good, exploring the loneliness of a Deity, but the way it's written is extremely impenetrable, full of long-winded, convoluted sentences that lose you as you read.

I don't hate this article, but I certainly do not like the way it's written. Novote.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898#post-4215274 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898/multiplicity#post-4215274 Wed, 10 Apr 2019 22:47:43 +0000 rumetzen 209204 A cool take on a creation myth, with a bit of commentary on the human condition mixed in. I dig it. The descriptions can be a bit vague at times, I found myself skimming through pronoun heavy parts like this:

They had no will and no life without her, and so she picked them up and split herself again as she created more, she needed to create more, she needed to not be by herself within herself, she needed something. And as it was her will, so it was. She created larger beings, beings that fed on the others, which created and hunted and explored and flew and ran and bit and fought and sang and were;

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898#post-4213692 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-11061898/multiplicity#post-4213692 Tue, 09 Apr 2019 14:04:18 +0000 RJB_R 1229263 I really enjoyed the way this was written, felt like a very smooth ride. Reminded me of my own Forgotten.

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