Comments for page "The Amphiptere and the Fruit" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit Posts in the discussion thread "The Amphiptere and the Fruit" Sat, 15 Aug 2026 22:08:11 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703#post-5097645 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit#post-5097645 Sat, 02 Oct 2021 00:24:57 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 This is just adorable; I didn't expect a nursery rhyme here. The rhymes flows really well, really wholesome as well.

Easy +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703#post-4931381 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit#post-4931381 Sun, 21 Mar 2021 06:30:15 +0000 Lt Flops 1735419 I can't read this and not smile, it's adorable. I also really appreciate the way the rhyme scheme and structure was kept up for so long. It's catchy.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703#post-2265476 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit#post-2265476 Mon, 06 Apr 2015 22:44:21 +0000 Bryx 1786305 Library-Foundation crossreferencing, woot woot!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703#post-2264972 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit#post-2264972 Mon, 06 Apr 2015 06:47:52 +0000 Vehemency 1267588 My favorite thing is that I can imagine a fat little creature pooting around eating fruits.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703#post-2264958 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-1164703/the-amphiptere-and-the-fruit#post-2264958 Mon, 06 Apr 2015 05:58:46 +0000 Zyn 1404533 Thanks to Rumetzen, Palaios, Vehemency, and Riemann (who pushed for consistent line meter!) for reading this over. This grew out of a vague idea that I thought up while writing a SH SCP.

Edit: Also Clef! For rhythm fixes, and the ending lines. :3

Edit II: For those interested, the SCP that alludes to this is SCP-2175.

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