http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747/the-whoremongers-of-misty-mountain Posts in the discussion thread "The Whoremongers Of Misty Mountain" Tue, 15 Sep 2026 03:50:17 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747#post-7100276 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747/the-whoremongers-of-misty-mountain#post-7100276 Thu, 07 Aug 2025 17:07:31 +0000 destinysday 5296313 Agreeing with the above posts, I can't pinpoint if it was the tone or grammar, or something else all together, but I just wasn't a fan of this one

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747#post-5378703 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747/the-whoremongers-of-misty-mountain#post-5378703 Thu, 09 Jun 2022 16:55:38 +0000 Shmoopi 5923467 I hate being a stickler about things like this, but there are some inconsistent tenses and other grammatical mistakes in this. It sort of gives me non-native English speaker vibes. Not a big problem or anything, just wanted to recommend that you run your further writings through an editing software.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747#post-4336614 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12346747/the-whoremongers-of-misty-mountain#post-4336614 Wed, 21 Aug 2019 14:36:20 +0000 RJB_R 1229263 I loved the line ”Our DNAs were just mixed with angelic genetic code." because of how silly and self-serious it is. I don't know if parts of this are intended to be read tongue-in-cheek but I enjoyed reading it through that lens. If you tweak it at all in the future I'd say lean more heavily on that 10 cent Amazing Tales aesthetic. That's something I would enjoy.

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