Comments for page "Ascension Bends"

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Tue, 04 Jul 2023 18:03:04 +0000

While the twist was obvious, the way everything builds up to it is so mesmerizing to look at. Amazingly fun worldbuilding.

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Fri, 20 Sep 2019 13:54:02 +0000

This is so enjoyable to read both in terms of composition and what's happening in the story and its progression. I hope we see more from you soon, Nat, because I love this.

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Thu, 19 Sep 2019 15:51:23 +0000

The pacing here was excellent in that, while I had no fucking clue what was happening in the beginning, little tidbits of information were dropped on me slowly but steadily across the piece until I saw the bigger picture. Awesome writing here Nat, easy +1.

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Wed, 18 Sep 2019 23:58:20 +0000

first Wanderer's Library article and I was absolutely winging it as I wrote it let's go

Thanks to MaliceAforethought, Avelon21, Sebarus, and Roget for reading and critting!