Draft Critique: Someone Darke https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12843835/draft-critique:someone-darke Posts in the discussion thread "Draft Critique: Someone Darke" - My first draft for the Wanderer's Library Sun, 11 Oct 2026 03:18:57 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12843835#post-4438518 Re: Draft Critique: Someone Darke https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12843835/draft-critique:someone-darke#post-4438518 Thu, 05 Dec 2019 00:59:51 +0000 5341612 Suggestions:

-"The lock was placed int a shallow divet" Change "int" to "into"
-"Darke just grunted and let the body fall into the cart while Isidor…" Change "Isidor" to "Isidora", like how you spell it earlier.

Besides that, I like it. Good flow, good characters. I recommend posting and seeing how your writing fares in the Library.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12843835#post-4437897 Draft Critique: Someone Darke https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-12843835/draft-critique:someone-darke#post-4437897 Wed, 04 Dec 2019 07:16:30 +0000 DrChandra 1956625 http://topia.wikidot.com/drchandra-s-box-of-sand My first draft for the Wanderer's Library. First tab, Someone Darke. It's about 2450 words, set in the 15th century, about an Inquisitor who comes to pay Darke a visit. It was originally conceived for the SCP wiki, but other than the Character of Darke, the SCP content is nearly non-existent. Let me know what you think of it, and if it's suitable for the Library.

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