Comments for page "Meathook" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook Posts in the discussion thread "Meathook" Sat, 15 Aug 2026 22:12:46 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-5605606 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-5605606 Thu, 29 Sep 2022 23:33:37 +0000 rumetzen 209204 Thank you Dune! I'm really happy you enjoyed my story so much :)

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4964325 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4964325 Tue, 27 Apr 2021 03:07:13 +0000 J Dune 6682213 Awesome characterization. The little SCP references were delightful, and the action is fluidly written. A+ Story.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4614717 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4614717 Sun, 26 Apr 2020 07:24:18 +0000 Zero_Consistency 2865441 Grammar and spelling mistakes aside (which I happily fixed for you) this is a great character piece, and it doesn't focus on any one element for too long! I personally would love to see the sequel! +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4611010 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4611010 Thu, 23 Apr 2020 15:45:06 +0000 RJB_R 1229263 This oozes with voice and character, and the controlled rambling gave me Bukowski/Thompson vibes, with a dash of Richard Connell, all in a good way. Gonzo Library is an aesthetic I can get behind.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4610556 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4610556 Thu, 23 Apr 2020 10:46:17 +0000 Rounderhouse 4187885

the places this game leads me to are shitholes. War zones, death cults, Chicago.

downvoted >:C

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4609739 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4609739 Thu, 23 Apr 2020 04:33:25 +0000 5341612 "imagine" and "to handfuls" are probably typos…But like aside from that I'm straight-up amazed. And I also like how there are some nudges to SCP-verse that actually make this piece a nice starter for newbies to the site that like to references SCP things directly too much. Using "telegraphed" like that was also appreciated, since I'd only heard the term in, well, telegraphs and music improv—makes sense to use it in a well-written, intense fight scene. Voice came out strong in this one as well. +1.

I swear Rounder had something with a concept similar to this in the works. Definitely different stories, but there's telepathy there.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627#post-4608142 Author Post http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13260627/meathook#post-4608142 Wed, 22 Apr 2020 06:36:13 +0000 rumetzen 209204 I had way more fun writing this than I expected. Started out having no idea where it was going and ended up with something I might end up turning into a series.

Credit to A Random Day and Rounderhouse for critique, and ARD for the title

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