Comments for page "A Rising Wave"

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Sun, 17 May 2020 06:31:10 +0000

Understandable—but I like the idea that remaking the entire world is just a chore for her, one put off too long.

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Fri, 08 May 2020 04:24:17 +0000

This a great story, I don't really think that line of dialogue at the end adds anything to it and I think slightly hampers the tone with its humor. Overall still a +1 though!

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Sat, 25 Apr 2020 23:05:12 +0000

Thank you very much :)

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Sat, 25 Apr 2020 05:32:34 +0000

This is real good shit. Very atmospheric.

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Sat, 25 Apr 2020 01:59:02 +0000

My first post to this site, I believe. Based mostly on prompt twelve: 'A woman dances in the sea, and she is burning.'