First attempt at writing http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852/first-attempt-at-writing Posts in the discussion thread "First attempt at writing" - A short story about the aftermath of the Battle of Cannae. The dead never truly died, and constantly remember their deaths and losses. Fri, 17 Jul 2026 01:56:30 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852#post-4619747 Re: First attempt at writing http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852/first-attempt-at-writing#post-4619747 Tue, 28 Apr 2020 17:18:35 +0000 6215184 Thank you for the feedback!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852#post-4619730 Re: First attempt at writing http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852/first-attempt-at-writing#post-4619730 Tue, 28 Apr 2020 17:03:20 +0000 5341612 There isn't really any story here…

I expected something like a collection of the memories of the soldiers.

Don't be afraid to expand.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852#post-4619721 First attempt at writing http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13275852/first-attempt-at-writing#post-4619721 Tue, 28 Apr 2020 16:59:39 +0000 6215184 The Battle of Cannae left about 86,000 Roman and allied troops dead. They’re dead, and can’t move, but are still able to remember how they died. In their graves, trapped in skeletal bodies, the soldiers scream. And if you’re quiet, you may hear. It’s probably not too good of an idea but I wanted to try. If my explanation didn’t do the idea justice, here’s my draft page: http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/currentnathan.

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