Comments for page "A Visit"

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Mon, 20 Jun 2022 01:23:38 +0000

Was waiting for the other shoe to drop the entire read, but it was just nice. Speaking of shoes

Even the fast foot place they stopped at tasted different to him

I hear boiled boots are pretty popular this time of year.

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Tue, 26 Jan 2021 22:38:32 +0000

I really like how both characters have their own kind of forgetfulness. Samuel doesn’t remember Cleveland since he was too young, and his mother, while remembering the place itself, forgot what it meant to her. Was a very touching piece

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Sun, 24 Jan 2021 07:06:20 +0000

I think my only issue with this is that it could use more. That is, more atmosphere to soak in and more fleshing out of the mother character. These could be tied together; for instance, the mother could be the one to point out specific details of Cleveland that stand out to her as mementos, thus building up to her emotional reaction more.

That said, it did give me feels, so it works. +1 :)

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Sun, 24 Jan 2021 04:16:40 +0000

My first article on the Wanderers' Library, I hope you enjoy it! In this tale, I wanted to focus on the concept of personal forgetfulness, rather than social forgetfulness. Here, a woman has forgotten about the special gift a city has given her, and a journey with her son opens changes her perspective on it.

This tale is dedicated to my mother, who asked me to write her a short story for her birthday.

A huge thanks to Karablue9482 does not match any existing user name, Grigori Karpin, ihp does not match any existing user name, and Sonderance.