Comments for page "General Store" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store Posts in the discussion thread "General Store" Fri, 07 Aug 2026 12:24:59 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-6063219 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-6063219 Mon, 24 Apr 2023 00:46:07 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 Beautiful atmospheric writing. The story it tells is really subtle and obscured, but impactful nonetheless.

+1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-5063861 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-5063861 Mon, 23 Aug 2021 03:52:18 +0000 Whitehills 6694512 This started focusing on the mundane and ended up being so deep, your way with words is admirable, I wish my poetry was as good as this, holy cow. +1, would vote twice if I could.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4895077 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4895077 Thu, 11 Feb 2021 03:39:06 +0000 Doctor Pann 6197854 I'm not super elegant with words, so I'll just say that this was incredible. Good job.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4887984 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4887984 Wed, 03 Feb 2021 20:55:49 +0000 Snapdragon133 5193476 Always look forward to your poems, carolynn, and this one did not disappoint

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4887853 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4887853 Wed, 03 Feb 2021 15:28:01 +0000 carolynn w 5070187 aw thanks malice!! i guess it would be "worth the money" for some given value of "the money." jokes aside, i wouldn't hate the idea of selling my poetry to some publication or magazine, making my own book… or being a court poet…? i'm definitely thinking of shopping around for places to show my portfolio haha.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4886469 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4886469 Tue, 02 Feb 2021 02:21:08 +0000 MaliceAforethought 2902864 If this contest is an example of six days of your writing, it's a wonder someone's not paying you to write poetry full-time. Lord knows it'd be worth the money.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4883001 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4883001 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 00:39:19 +0000 carolynn w 5070187 half of me is like perfect monster?? aww sludge i'm flattered and my other half is Come Challenge Me, Mortal

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4882988 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4882988 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 00:23:50 +0000 CadaverCommander 3187823 all i can say is fuck you for being this good at stringing words together. i seethe with jealous hatred at your ability to throw out hammer-hard and razor-sharp lines like "i would like to buy my creaturehood back". i will challenge the throne of the carolynn empire. i will defeat you, you perfect monster

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343#post-4881511 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-13988343/general-store#post-4881511 Wed, 27 Jan 2021 05:09:11 +0000 carolynn w 5070187 Everything is free now
That's what they say
Everything I ever done, gotta give it away
Someone hit the big score, and figured it out
That we're gonna do it anyway
Even if it doesn't pay

—-

what is something you could buy, that you shouldn't be able to buy? what's something you want that you cannot have?

my last piece for the scavenger hunt contest! i had a lot of fun with these three poems; i entered each day not knowing what i would write, and left each one a little prouder of myself. also i worry linking music in the author post is a bit myspace but i love music so much i can't help but lean into it. hope you enjoy!!

many thanks to UraniumEmpireUraniumEmpire and minminminmin for crit!

check out my author page!

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