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				<title>mmm</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Sep 2022 04:28:37 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Clysm31201</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>7717943</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>tod</p> <p><em>+1</em></p> 
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2021 15:26:57 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Gabriel McQueen</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>4558836</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>That's definitely the most adorable apocalypse story I've ever read.</p> 
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				<title>First Post!</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2021 17:07:40 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <div class="newblock" style="width: intrinsic; width: -moz-max-content; width: -webkit-max-content; text-align:center; margin: 10px auto;"> <p><a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">I'm nobody's fool and yet it's clear to me</a><br /> <a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">I don't have a strategy</a><br /> <a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">It's just like taking candy from a baby</a><br /> <a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">And I think I must be</a></p> <p><a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">Under attack, I'm being taken</a><br /> <a href="https://youtu.be/rAYB46Z_osM">About to crack, defenses breaking</a></p> </div> <div class="collapsible-block"> <div class="collapsible-block-folded"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">+&nbsp;Author&nbsp;Commentary</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded" style="display:none"> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded-link"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">-&nbsp;Author&nbsp;Commentary</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-content"> <div class="blockquote"> <p>This started out as a draft for the <a href="http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/scavenger-hunt-contest">Wanderer's Library Scavenger Hunt Contest</a>, which is their equivalent of JamCon. While my initial draft had something, I wanted to spend more time on it and make it something better. I held off on posting it, rewrote a significant portion of it, and left it in a sandbox for a few months to work on other things. I eventually came back to it and&#8230; well I guess that's obvious.</p> <p>The hardest part of this was finding the balance between the serious sections and the comedic sections. If done well, the juxtaposition should make the funny parts funnier and the serious parts serious-er. If done poorly, both fall flat. The advice I got from <span class="printuser avatarhover"><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/gremlingroup" ><img class="small" src="https://www.wikidot.com/avatar.php?userid=5287352&amp;amp;size=small&amp;amp;timestamp=1696954928" alt="GremlinGroup" style="background-image:url(https://www.wikidot.com/userkarma.php?u=5287352)" /></a><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/gremlingroup" >GremlinGroup</a></span> was to cut the jokes that felt like they were trying to be jokes. For example, the underlined section in this sentence was removed: &quot;Hourly aftershocks, looters in ruined cities, survivors inevitably turning on each other <span style="text-decoration: underline;">and suggesting that maybe humans were the <em>real</em> monsters all along</span>, the usual.&quot;</p> </div> </div> </div> </div> <p><strong>Critters:</strong> <span class="printuser avatarhover"><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/gremlingroup" ><img class="small" src="https://www.wikidot.com/avatar.php?userid=5287352&amp;amp;size=small&amp;amp;timestamp=1696954928" alt="GremlinGroup" style="background-image:url(https://www.wikidot.com/userkarma.php?u=5287352)" /></a><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/gremlingroup" >GremlinGroup</a></span>, <span class="printuser avatarhover"><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/dysadron" ><img class="small" src="https://www.wikidot.com/avatar.php?userid=4384469&amp;amp;size=small&amp;amp;timestamp=1696954928" alt="Dysadron" style="background-image:url(https://www.wikidot.com/userkarma.php?u=4384469)" /></a><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/dysadron" >Dysadron</a></span>, <span class="printuser avatarhover"><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/skipmeister" ><img class="small" src="https://www.wikidot.com/avatar.php?userid=6983378&amp;amp;size=small&amp;amp;timestamp=1696954928" alt="Skipmeister" style="background-image:url(https://www.wikidot.com/userkarma.php?u=6983378)" /></a><a href="http://www.wikidot.com/user:info/skipmeister" >Skipmeister</a></span></p> 
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