To start off, this concept is not bad. I specifically enjoyed the phrase The World Is Burning Down Around Us, and I could see it as an effective motto or call to action.

Unfortunately, this article came up short for me. The first half being all bold isn’t very appealing, to start. I also felt like this document really should’ve been longer, maybe stating their goals or really anything other than what reads like an introduction. Finally, there are just too many grammatical mistakes plus the writing feels very stilted in places. I would really recommend trying reading your works out loud to catch many mistakes you wouldn’t if you just read silently.

We really encourage seeking critique before posting, which can either be done in the forums or on the discord. I’d still really like to see you continue writing here, but this one needs some work before I feel comfortable upvoting