Comments for page "We'll Face the Silence Together"

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Fri, 29 May 2026 17:57:09 +0000

This could have been more vivid, and is clunky in more than a few places, but is effective otherwise at what it wants to do. +1

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Wed, 11 Oct 2023 13:30:13 +0000

This made me want to cry at the end. Really successful at drawing the reader. No SPaG errors. +1.
I think this is my favorite of all the articles I have read on this site so far.

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Sat, 07 Oct 2023 02:23:00 +0000

When touching grass goes too far

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Sat, 13 Nov 2021 00:21:48 +0000

Very spooky, with plain but effective prose.

Re: My First Article

Thu, 11 Nov 2021 10:56:01 +0000

Brilliant effort! This was my first crit here at the library. I look forward to reading your next work, too…

My First Article

Thu, 11 Nov 2021 01:13:31 +0000

My first article on the site! Thanks to Hambleton and Snapdragon133 for their feedback!