Comments for page "Night Fishing"

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Tue, 21 May 2024 04:44:04 +0000

Aahhhh
An old classic. The Eddie's swim across my head as time ripples back to when I first read this. I remember the beautiful imagery, the terrifying evocative nature of greed as personal depravity. Most of all, i remember the sea. The sea. The Sea. You and the depths.

I'm always devilishly happy to delve with you, Stygian. Beautiful work. Love the poem, too.

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Wed, 29 Dec 2021 20:25:46 +0000

Thank you so much, you are most kind! This is definitely the one I put the most personal affect into. I think that the beginning is a bit weak, but there's always room for improvement! Have a great winter <3

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Wed, 29 Dec 2021 19:57:23 +0000

I think I mostly understand what the colors mean, but I definitely don’t totally understand what the whole story is saying lol. Either way, I really enjoyed it! Very descriptive, and pretty creepy in certain parts. +1

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Fri, 24 Dec 2021 02:56:56 +0000

Another banger! I still absolutely love it. You've really nailed the second person perspective!

Well done. So far, I'd call this your Magnum Opus, but goodness the works you contribute to the Library are all incredible.

It was an utter blast to read! 10/10