Comments for page "Past And Future" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future Posts in the discussion thread "Past And Future" Tue, 08 Sep 2026 12:21:21 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755#post-6758969 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future#post-6758969 Sun, 22 Dec 2024 03:50:07 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 Woooow. At the start. The prose is somewhat repetitive, but the character work is solid and the journal has a very nice voice. Like soft flat bread brushed with butter. . I think it shows definite promise. Someone to watch!!

—Avalon

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755#post-5291170 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future#post-5291170 Sat, 23 Apr 2022 19:26:21 +0000 Grendelnacht 7673896 I have the same confusion, although I am eager to see how the story progresses!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755#post-5284137 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future#post-5284137 Tue, 19 Apr 2022 21:18:23 +0000 meltedbee 7730848 Thank you for letting me know! Your feedback is appreciated, and that sort of circumstance is understandable given this work's place as the start of a series. I'll try to make it easier to understand. Thanks again!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755#post-5284118 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future#post-5284118 Tue, 19 Apr 2022 20:29:05 +0000 andromedaz 7447617 While I like the immersive writing to this (as always), I do not quite understand what is going on here. There is a journal, a travelling historian, and a military lieutenant, and I don't quite understand. Maybe I'm just brain dead, so I'll novote this.

No vote.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755#post-5261042 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14613755/past-and-future#post-5261042 Mon, 11 Apr 2022 07:01:05 +0000 meltedbee 7730848 This is my first work, hopefully part of a series about our mysterious wandering historian. Thank you to Skipmeister and bulbAbandoned for crit!

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