Comments for page "The River" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189/the-river Posts in the discussion thread "The River" Sat, 11 Jul 2026 02:58:12 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189#post-6943772 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189/the-river#post-6943772 Tue, 29 Apr 2025 02:00:20 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 this has notes of the same preachiness that i didn't care for in din's piece, but i think the characteristically lush prose ties it together alright. it's also just a really cool visual.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189#post-6521081 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189/the-river#post-6521081 Thu, 30 May 2024 05:12:10 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 Fucking terrifying! The imagery hits immaculately. Genuinely frightening to consider in a serious way and one of my biggest existential fears.

Bravo.

Spicy, like upon dipped in Wasabi, attacking my tongue.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189#post-5396139 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189/the-river#post-5396139 Sat, 18 Jun 2022 16:34:22 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 Really like how you wrote this piece. I mean, ok, not a big fan of white text, but the way you make this River feel alive, and have this passive-like persona, slowly building up to the climax is just really, really good. You do a really good job at making that grandiose-like feel: It's just a river, but it's also so much more.

+1~

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189#post-5294084 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-14649189/the-river#post-5294084 Tue, 26 Apr 2022 23:04:31 +0000 Snapdragon133 5193476 Don't worry everyone "you" just moved to a nice farm upstate, they're totally fine

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