Comments for page "Purposefully Untitled" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15706280/purposefully-untitled Posts in the discussion thread "Purposefully Untitled" Thu, 16 Apr 2026 20:25:47 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15706280#post-6063107 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15706280/purposefully-untitled#post-6063107 Sun, 23 Apr 2023 19:00:16 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 Ehhhh… The beginning of your piece interested me, but I feel there is a strong tone shift around the Ohio-Texas lines and then the fish bit and you sorta lost me there. You recover the pace quickly enough, but considering how short the piece is, that bit at the middle really dragged down the experience for me.

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