Comments for page "In Which a Black Hole Contemplates on a Beach"

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Thu, 23 Jul 2026 05:20:41 +0000

He is reminded of the past again…

Relationships are hard, as you have precisely worded in this section.

Setting it at a beach with another "blackness" by his side, I feel like I'm witnessing the end of this protagonist's saga. As the protagonist watches the water processing all of the things he's done, I am reminded that I should take a break from my cares and admire the waves once in a while.

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Fri, 24 Mar 2023 05:19:08 +0000

Thanks for your thoughts, Stygian

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Fri, 24 Mar 2023 01:53:25 +0000

Little short for my liking, but a nice work overall. Sweet and to the point — wish there'd been more buildup. I adore the symbolism of seeing oneself as a black hole and finding that even there there can be a bit of darker self inside, and isolating that so you can live a fuller life. Yum. Tastes like dried seaweed and brine.

-Styg

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Thu, 23 Mar 2023 09:46:03 +0000

I wasn't originally going to post this, but the responses I got from the people I showed were good, so here it is

Thanks to DrGooday, J T K C, and SWEET2OOTH for their opinions prior to posting