Comments for page "Springtime Blues" https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664/springtime-blues Posts in the discussion thread "Springtime Blues" Tue, 13 Oct 2026 22:06:48 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664#post-6048702 (no title) https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664/springtime-blues#post-6048702 Thu, 06 Apr 2023 03:07:57 +0000 UncannyClown276 7856171 there's a certain inconsistency to the deployment of commas throughout this piece that made some bits a little difficult to understand at first for me. still, i like this quite a lot. there's some very nice imagery here, and it nicely conveys the feelings of melancholy that define the poem.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664#post-6046747 (no title) https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664/springtime-blues#post-6046747 Tue, 04 Apr 2023 06:25:11 +0000 scalykitty 8398456 I read it. Felt like reading it again, so I did. I think that makes it a good poem. Well done!

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664#post-6046420 (no title) https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664/springtime-blues#post-6046420 Mon, 03 Apr 2023 17:33:06 +0000 Harro365 6833800 Im in Oregon and it has been snowing for the past two days. Wellcome to spring.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664#post-6046286 (no title) https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-15786664/springtime-blues#post-6046286 Mon, 03 Apr 2023 14:46:38 +0000 NotAnOligarch 7466531 don't move to south dakota guys
this is real: school closes often, even now, and we're yet expecting another freakin' snowstorm

thanks to the inexorable MaddGasserGatonMaddGasserGaton for the flyby and approval!
If this feels rushed (fingers crossed it doesn't), that's because I did this in like an hour.

Thanks!
-Oli

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