Comments for page "Av, Second Rotation, 5099"

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Sun, 30 Apr 2023 21:50:55 +0000

I loved seeing Ulak and Aníbal interact here, offering us time to understand both of their characters a bit better (Aníbal especially). The enduring mystery of The One in Moonlight is similarly captivating, I can't wait to see where it goes. I am kinda disappointed that the crash has been so swiftly skipped over here, but the idea that Aníbal had something to do with it intrigues me - and hints to me that a description of the crash by Ulak may be discovered sometime later? Maybe? Hopefully? Either way, this was a pretty good continuation of the story and I can't wait to see the next one!

Another Din-Banger

Sat, 22 Apr 2023 10:55:04 +0000

Yay! Congrats on reaching 70 stories my friend! The rich prose, the mysterious dialogue- it all fits together splendidly to create a wonderful piece of writing. It took a lot of work to get where you are, which is weird cuz usually you'd know how hyphens work by now- just kidding, that was genuinely the only issue I could spot and it didn't detract from the story at all. Godspeed Din, I can't wait fir another 70 more.

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Sat, 22 Apr 2023 03:53:57 +0000

Lettuce feast upon this chicken Dinner. Or, it's delicious and it continues the last in its own excellent near-standalone fashion. Gorgeous character work as always.

-Styg

ULAK IS BACK, BABY!

Sat, 22 Apr 2023 03:53:28 +0000

And thus are 70 stories completed! Welcome back, my dear Ulak!