Critique request: "Echoes of Darkness" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16043740/critique-request:echoes-of-darkness Posts in the discussion thread "Critique request: "Echoes of Darkness"" Thu, 12 Mar 2026 07:22:50 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16043740#post-6218289 Re: Critique request: "Echoes of Darkness" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16043740/critique-request:echoes-of-darkness#post-6218289 Sat, 07 Oct 2023 02:44:56 +0000 Heather Rose Brown 8825498 Wow … that was a beautifully written story! It's also heartbreaking. I was really confused about what Alex's parents decided to do. I hope things work out okay for him. I know not all stories have happy endings, but that doesn't stop me from hoping.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16043740#post-6134406 Critique request: "Echoes of Darkness" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16043740/critique-request:echoes-of-darkness#post-6134406 Tue, 27 Jun 2023 08:58:33 +0000 Dr Avenlee 8258295 Another haiku story.

Title: "Echoes of Darkness"

Sandbox link: http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/druntitled

Hopefully this one gets better reactions than the first.

Any type of critique is welcome.

(Check the collapsible of the same name.)

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