Comments for page "The One Rite for Rust" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16204500/the-one-rite-for-rust Posts in the discussion thread "The One Rite for Rust" Thu, 12 Mar 2026 07:27:40 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16204500#post-6164085 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16204500/the-one-rite-for-rust#post-6164085 Tue, 01 Aug 2023 03:55:39 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 Hmmm. Dunno bout this one. While I enjoyed the somewhat chaotic meter, I wasn't really feeling the contents of the piece itself. I dunno; the overall piece felt very barebones. Didn't hate it, mind you; just didn't like it either.

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]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16204500#post-6162733 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16204500/the-one-rite-for-rust#post-6162733 Sun, 30 Jul 2023 14:30:07 +0000 cafecow 7835091 Lovely little piece Indy! I adore your use of inconsistent meter and repetition. It gives the poem an overall serene but desperate vibe. +1 as always friend, keep it up!

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