A massive thank you is in order to the user known as Vishardsh who has not only been a champion of this infantile series, was willing to crit this piece, but also a fellow rogue planet writer. If you somehow haven't read any of Ocular Haze, you need to get on that. It's a much more tech-punk-augment-outlaw look at a rogue planet and focused on a singular story rather than my bastardization of the vignette format. Fun fact of the day: Yu's metal teeth were my extremely subtle and minimal reference to the far more extensive augmentation of the characters in Ocular Haze. Close, but no cigar.