Comments for page "My Path Serpentine" http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine Posts in the discussion thread "My Path Serpentine" Fri, 12 Jun 2026 17:19:39 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148#post-6413797 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine#post-6413797 Sun, 28 Jan 2024 17:07:12 +0000 FleshMaddAvalon 7504782 Like eating fire composed of your favorite meal. Familiar, but it opens old wounds. I've felt this before. You captured it your dish well. Depressingly delectable.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148#post-6410308 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine#post-6410308 Wed, 24 Jan 2024 17:52:57 +0000 Stygian Blue 7679669 THIS AT LAST!!! Good posting. Good eating. My teeth hurt from biting — like with sugar sensitivity, but salt. Goodbye, cold sores. Hello, salt burns.

-Styg

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148#post-6409185 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine#post-6409185 Tue, 23 Jan 2024 15:02:57 +0000 zipzipskins 5558639 a bite-sized package of emotion, a little window into tbe soul. it never takes off and soars, but is bound to the ground agonizingly. and it works better that way.

vivid, painful, demanding. +1

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148#post-6409155 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine#post-6409155 Tue, 23 Jan 2024 14:53:32 +0000 NotAnOligarch 7466531 This tastes of metallic tang. Like chewing on aluminum-shard salad. It works its ways into your gums and flavors the way you bite down on the rest of your meals for the day. Malleable, it stabs in searing, neurotic pain; someone who has never tasted salt or a life worth season, I struggle to digest. But indigestion is welcomed and deserved. The taste is vivid, and worth the gashes down my esophagus.

Styg would have done it better anyhow.
Well done nonetheless.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148#post-6408100 (no title) http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16682148/my-path-serpentine#post-6408100 Tue, 23 Jan 2024 06:24:52 +0000 Din-Bidor 5321480 I've done a lot of awful things in my lifetime, and guilt is a constant feeling in the mind of someone who was raised Catholic. Here you go: a tiny slice of my own religious guilt.

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