Comments for page "Caelum et Terra"

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Fri, 20 Sep 2024 17:51:47 +0000

Ohohohoho I am loving this rhythm or flow or whatever you want to call it in this piece, it is bursting with wonderfully thought out moments. There's callbacks, there's crosslink, there's parentheticals yrahgrhaghr. I love this poem

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Sat, 18 May 2024 19:17:09 +0000

finally getting around to catch up on a few things. i like this! the lilting inner rhyme scheme is very enjoyable and i love the messaging. a little verbose at times — it gets a touch dense for my tastes once or twice, but always manages to find the flow again. i think a lot, as well, about finding "god" in whatever sense of the word in a multitude of ways and places. +1, nice job

olicoldpoem

Mon, 06 May 2024 15:13:54 +0000

I need to drink tea at night more often. Based on real events, I guess. I'm trying to get back into the regular posting of poems, and this is a coldpost. Perhaps that's a bad habit of mine, but I thought this deserved a more raw portrayal. This is sort of a spiritual (ha) successor to Deus ex Mundo. Might turn these reflections into a series of sorts, who knows.

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