https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16883580/poem-crit-request:first-time Posts in the discussion thread "Poem Crit Request: First Time" Sun, 11 Oct 2026 03:01:47 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16883580#post-6563268 https://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16883580/poem-crit-request:first-time#post-6563268 Fri, 12 Jul 2024 13:29:00 +0000 A Dream Bus 8273309 This poem is a modern one, thus not written with the intention of being rhythmic or rhyming. Its style is kinda dark, actually written in one of my moments of despair. I would appreciate a SPaG review as well as an overall evaluation.

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