http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997/note-on-youth Posts in the discussion thread "Note on Youth" Fri, 17 Apr 2026 08:39:56 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997#post-6629448 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997/note-on-youth#post-6629448 Sun, 25 Aug 2024 16:54:30 +0000 Maxyfran73 7498739 I like this. There's such tenderness to the writing, to that which is lost, to that which is gained. An exquisite piece. +1~

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997#post-6600469 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997/note-on-youth#post-6600469 Wed, 14 Aug 2024 04:01:39 +0000 UncannyClown 9189726 the scene is rendered with tender vividity; the metaphors are sublime; and the word economy is excellent, as zip noted. this may be one of my favorites of yours.

]]> http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997#post-6600466 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16906997/note-on-youth#post-6600466 Wed, 14 Aug 2024 03:46:21 +0000 zipzipskins 5558639 it is as ever difficult to find fault with your work. powerful, impactful, personal, with a gorgeous economy of language. youre a master of the craft around here. thanks for posting it. +1

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