Crit Request: The Student http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16922700/crit-request:the-student Posts in the discussion thread "Crit Request: The Student" - Writing help with this story of mine I've been working on. Tue, 08 Sep 2026 07:05:33 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16922700#post-6628383 Crit Request: The Student http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16922700/crit-request:the-student#post-6628383 Sat, 24 Aug 2024 20:43:46 +0000 Fancyassasin 4358051 Generally, I'm seeing if this story fits in well, as a constant fear of mine is that I add in too much detail/information when I write. If any conversations don't make sense or seem off, please let me know! I'm new to dialogue writing.

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