http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16942449/song-for-an-opossum Posts in the discussion thread "song for an opossum" Fri, 07 Aug 2026 18:52:39 +0000 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16942449#post-6771103 http://wanderers-library.wikidot.com/forum/t-16942449/song-for-an-opossum#post-6771103 Thu, 09 Jan 2025 15:52:50 +0000 zipzipskins 5558639 you do storytelling poetry quite well. something i think you excel at is maintaining a thematic cohesion through a poetic narrative. it's easy to get lost in word choice and diction and everything else — which are not weaknesses! — and lose sight of theme. it's not something you generally do, at least in your poetry since your return. really great, well-paced and rhythmic. +1

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